A/N: This
thing was supposed to be the fourth in an Autolycus/Strife series
I'd been writing, but for some reason I just couldn't make myself do
anything with it. The idea is hot (Auto/Discord, Auto/Strife, BDSM) and
it's not that I have a problem writing het, I just couldn't get the
damn thing moving!
I did a rewrite on it once,
hoping for some inspiration, but other than improving the original
draft, it really did nothing. I didn't get any further on it and I'm
doubting I ever will. I can see that I have some serious description
problems, awkward
phrasing and a slight point of view problem in a couple places. I spend
too much time in Auto's head and not enough letting him use that smart
mouth of his, and the gods' motivations are too vague. It's bad enough
that I can't make the story go anywhere; I don't even want to think
about another rewrite. I'll probably just shelve this one permanently.
Pairing(s):
Autolycus/Discord, Autolycus/Strife
Warnings: Never got past more
than light bondage, hints of upcoming n/c and an overall R rating.
Disclaimers: No own, no sue.
Archive: my site and
my
LJ.
Word count: 5408