Comments and Disclaimers for "untitled bondage fic"

A/N: This thing was supposed to be the fourth in an Autolycus/Strife series I'd been writing, but for some reason I just couldn't make myself do anything with it. The idea is hot (Auto/Discord, Auto/Strife, BDSM) and it's not that I have a problem writing het, I just couldn't get the damn thing moving!

I did a rewrite on it once, hoping for some inspiration, but other than improving the original draft, it really did nothing. I didn't get any further on it and I'm doubting I ever will. I can see that I have some serious description problems, awkward phrasing and a slight point of view problem in a couple places. I spend too much time in Auto's head and not enough letting him use that smart mouth of his, and the gods' motivations are too vague. It's bad enough that I can't make the story go anywhere; I don't even want to think about another rewrite. I'll probably just shelve this one permanently.

Pairing(s): Autolycus/Discord, Autolycus/Strife

Warnings: Never got past more than light bondage, hints of upcoming n/c and an overall R rating.

Disclaimers: No own, no sue.

Archive: my site and my LJ.

Word count: 5408


untitled bondage fic